Archive for 10/01/2013 - 11/01/2013

Femme Noir #11 by Brian Forrest

Wednesday, October 23, 2013 § 0

Femme Noir #11 ink and wash on paper by Brian Forrest


Born in Canada and bred in the U.S., Brian Forrest works in many mediums: oil painting, computer graphics, theatre, digital music, film, and video. Brian studied acting at Columbia Pictures in Los Angeles, digital media in art and design at Bellevue College receiving degrees in Web Multimedia Authoring and Digital Video Production. He lives and works in the Vancouver, B.C. area in multimedia. Forrest is modern expressionist artist whose work is influenced by past and current colorism in art.

The Endless Short Story by Ronald Sukenick

Sunday, October 6, 2013 § 0

An Infinity of Narrato(logic)al Possibilities Envisioned as Paint Gestures on a White Canvas

Metafiction by 
David Detrich

interior monologue/description of the novel as the narrative logic of the beautiful mind revealed in a criti/fictional essay... 
a collection of innovative short stories...               admiration for the psychic awareness of the narrator...            envisioned as paint gestures of Abstract Expressionistic color on a white canvas...
written with a subtle narrative logic unifying the individual fictive pieces into a linear structure that implies the infinite... 
ascending motions characterize a para(meta)text in the form of a minimal square which begins each story...            interpreted in the future perfect tense imagined as the stellar evolution of the galaxy...             a title written in vertical letters as a design that implies a foreshadowing of a minimalist theme...                   the interconnectedness of the short story form implying infinity...
the collection becomes an ongoing narrative written with an intertextual awareness that guides the younger generation of innovators...              a plausible plot extending to infinity suggesting an endless deferment of meaning as the semester begins...            inspiring the young novelists who have developed a similar approach to the writing of fiction...                   the idea of a short story collection has evolved into the graphic novel/graphic short story envisioned from the perspective of the morning light...
a work of typographic art to be read in the context of Surrealism and modern art...             caramel espresso moods of indulgence...
where the art of fiction is the writing of art...             the abstract form of the narrator reads the words of the narrator who is writing The Endless Short Story...             becoming an endless number of narrators reading an endless short story...                   this brings the 21st Century American short story into visibility as a work of literary art...              a relaxed summer in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan as I work on the screenplay for The Convergence of Two Narrative Lines Ascending...                an ultramodern Surrealist novel written in minimal squares...                  Ronald Sukenick anticipates this direction in The Endless Short Story with his foreshadowing of the future perfect tense of reading...
interconnected stories which form an interlocking pattern where a short story is part of a larger meta/story...                   the story of all stories written in the decade of The Endless Short Story...
published in 1986 when the modern short story was evolving into a more sophisticated artform...                   written in minimalistic vertical columns...               the short story as a simplistic form of narrative art for the young reader...                    a plot that never ends...                   a narrator whose youthful simplicity evolves towards the realization of infinite love...
the abstract painterly forms of the students becoming a new generation of innovators...                    vanilla milkshake textures of paint stroked across the white textured canvas...
transforming into the mechanistic form of a male dancer in rhythmic variations pulsing under the laser lightshow...              my novel has become an erotic daisy chain of characterizations...                   unified by the perspective of the charming narrator...               The Endless Short Story begins with the story What's Watts about the artist Rodia who lives in Los Angeles...              the book review becomes a phenomenological reduction of esthetic theory into abstract brush strokes...              the lack of information about the identity of Rodia is a theme that anticipates the biography of the artist...               the artificial intelligence of the superhuman cartoon character resembles the hairstyle of the narrator...                 an identity that is multiple to the point of lacking clear definition...              small Surrealistic marshmallows are buoyant swimmers on the cream of his glazed green coffee cup...                 some artists spend a lifetime working in obscurity...              parsley sage rosemary and thyme...             and one wonders if there is any appreciation for their efforts?               the facts are in favor of posterity...             as the pleistocene glaciation reaches the edge of the Dry Creek Valley...               and the right to privacy of the literary artist to express his or her own experience...              the semantic field is a set of verbal gestures... 
to admire suggests meaning in the logic of language...
bringing out the esthetic beauty and painterly romance of the artistic lifestyle...                 to protect his deskspace from an invasion of multiple perspectives...                 the narrator reveals a simple logic that guides his efforts to comprehend the reality around him...             or her...                   a style of painting/writing which expresses intense emotional experience...                 this is close to the naive perspective of the young student as beginner...
distortion of facts exaggeration of fears the paranoid/critical perspective of Salvador Dali...              the psyche of the narrator returns to the childhood stories of the kids in his neighborhood...
when he was growing up in Brooklyn...                   his facial features reveal a heightened clarity and focus in the mirror...
an autobiographical theme that is similar to Henry Miller writing about Brooklyn...                   a painterly self-portrait as Dream the Presence of the Circular Breast Starfish Topography...              or to other novelists who return to their youth for an answer... 
layered images of intimate eroticism become abstractions...
the expressionistic use of language reveals a Dadaist concretion of meaning...             Aziff...                   Croo...                   nightlife personalities on the dance floor as the bar gradually changes color into electric blue...            written with Arabesques of abstract geometrical patterns...             men/women dancing to the beat while the VJ interprets the meta/data...             and there are moments when the author of Out (1973) may foreshadow this futuristic espionage plot...            the subjective Surreality of current events become literary disruptions as Jerome Klinkowitz has coined the concept...             a psychogenesis of the novelistic form becomes the upbeat trend for the new generation of innovators...                an endless series of revisions creating the visibility of typographic lines which have clarified into conceptual spatialized structures... 
which have through the process of painterly abstraction... 
become the idea of literary criticism evolving towards fictional awareness...             novelists writing an endless narrative that extends to infinity...
Crown Prince von Mocassin as a valid characterization...
You are getting closer to the subjective truth of surreality...            she is browsing in the calm quietude of introspection...                in the short story Verticals and Horizontals the reader perceives a mystical enigma at the time of reading...             a warm feeling of sexuality expressing thoughts in the pale blue grayness of sunrise... with precise insight into the contentment of the soft golden light and the relativity of time and space...             envisioned in a literary phantasy of west coast coffeehouse caramel cream moods...            the intellectual euphoria of the white pages of a novel-in-progress...                  the cartoon hero inspires the the first graders to read books with intense colors...          
fiction inspired by the theme of endless continuity... 
to paraphrase it the black velvet gentleman finds himself writing a similar type of endless short story...
a story that hasn't been told written in informal expressionistic prrrooooossssee...            bright young students at their computers brrrooowwwssse...             while the animated figure of a cartoon superhero considers the first steps towards abstraction...
                  the infinitive of the verb to love suggests love for life...      
fireworks in brrriiillliant luminosity light the sky over Iron River...
            writing from the point of view of a flower growing near the sidewalk as the sun rises...              love is at the origin of color and texture...

This is THE ENDLESS SHORT STORY. It doesn't matter where you start. You must have faith.
                                                   Verticals and Horizontals
                                                   Ronald Sukenick

1. The young flower woke in the morning as the sun rose above the sidewalk where the daisies and orange flowers were growing. A blue green sunbreeze began to rise above the blades of grass as the cartoon hero walked by...                This is the story of a  young writer who enjoyed the summer breeze, and the warm sunshine, as the flower wavered in the natural energies of the sunlight...                  To enjoy the summer breeze is my philosophy...


David Detrich lives in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan where he has just completed The Convergence of Two Narrative Lines Ascending, an ultramodern Surrealist novel written in minimal squares. This year he is working on Dream the Presence of the Circular Breast Starfish Topography, a monumental Surrealist novel written with innovative typographical design. His first novel Big Sur Marvels & Wondrous Delights (2001) is available from Amazon. He edits Innovative Fiction Magazine and Surrealist Star Clustered Illuminations.



A a Novel by Andy Warhol

Friday, October 4, 2013 § 1

A Pop Art Novel: writing/speaking Dialogue in A by Andy Warhol

A Book Review by 
David Detrich

(1968) by Andy Warhol is an innovative novel written as a Pop Art dialogue from taped conversations that discuss relevant concepts in modern art with a heightened sense of omniscience that creates a larger group of literary artists writing in the context of intertextuality. Andy Warhol writes/speaks in a casual style that is tuned into psychic group awareness that begins in the 1960s with two years of tape recorded conversations that create an American expressionist trend of speech written with inaccuracies of grammar: from gaps in the audio tape, from a one sided conversation overheard, from traffic sounds, and from other simultaneous voices interweaving in a collage of language that approaches the contemporary realism of New York street life. The theme of this monumental book/happening is social awareness with the transcription of conversations between two characters: Drella and Ondine based on Andy Warhol himself and Robert Olivo. The dialogue features an encounter with celebrity artist Robert Rauschenberg, with talk show hosts, and visits to well known restaurants, and begins with the characters Ondine and Drella speculating on art, sexuality, and the interesting characters on the New York scene.

What did you and Rita speak about last night first of all and isn't she marvelous? Yeah. Isn't she tru-truly marvelous. She's the meanest girl in the world but she's so fun.
     Really? She has a, y'know, like, like a, like a, like all mean girls she's been—she's been treated roughly.
                                                                  A
                                                                  Andy Warhol

A by Andy Warhol has the complexity of structure to make this an intellectually fascinating novel with detailed opinions on everything that is happening, and the narrator Drella shows the true spirit of the 1960s which is in tune with the complex social network revealing masterful insights into the art world of New York. The success of Andy Warhol is his acceptance of the social scene with appreciative portraits of the women and men who exist in the Pop Art context of American culture.

Poor darling, we  used to go to the, uh, uh—Rotten Rita will, will wing for—for the first time she will be recorded. Oh really? And she will, yes she'll even acCOMpany herself on the piano, and then we'll all go and have a magnificent brunch.
                                                                   A
                                                                   Andy Warhol

A by Andy Warhol has been inspired by the monumental novel Ulysses (1922) by James Joyce which describes a single day in the life of the narrator Stephen Daedalus, while a is composed of tape recorded conversations that reveal a very detailed self-portrait of Andy Warhol, and were transcribed by some young high school women for Andy Warhol, with gaps in the transcriptions, missing character names for some of the speakers, and with a spontaneous quality which includes misspelled words and incomplete sentence structures.

Oh, oh you know everybody does. Who? Oh, oh all the...what does misanthrope mean? It sorta means a powerful person right? Yeah, well these are not the powerful ones, these are the pilot fish, what, whatever-ever that stuff's supposed to mean. The ones that spread rumors, y'know.
                                                                      A
                                                                      Andy Warhol

The idea of a powerful misanthrope is defined as someone who plays a malevolent role towards humanity, and which shows that Drella is aware of the problematic nature of the network: foreshadowing the events which could disturb the city of New York and his own security some day.


Time is of the essenceactually it's the essential element of the book. There are just so many tapes to fill, hours to stay awake, and so time's on everyone's mind. The tape recorder's going; a book is being made. The Book is being made. In fact, the last words in the novel, spoken by Billy Name are: "Out of the garbage, into the Book."
                                                             The Last Words Are
                                                             Andy Warhol
                                                             Lynne Tillman

The idea of the idealized Book is a concept introduced by Stéphane Mallarmé, and is being realized in this artistic effort by Drella and Ondine to achieve the ultimate in novelistic transcription of the intricacies of life onto the printed page. I think Andy Warhol has inspired others to consider the novel as an artform that is similar to avant garde classical music in its use of dialogue as sound for concrete and electronic music. I am reminded of Michel Butor who wrote Niagara: A Stereophonic Novel (1965) which is a dialogue for stereo speakers, and is part of the trend towards experimentation with the novel as it converges on tape recorded sound for audio broadcast.

What do you mean Denny can't afford it?     Uh, it's 40,000 a painting now.      Well, that pretty good, isn't it? It's an awfully high price.      Describe himself.      Divine, yeah, high. Yeah but what does he do? How does he paint? Is he a pop, is he considered pop artist?      He is the father of art.     With surprise—What?      Well, he can't be like Jack Daniels.     He came before soup? I don't believe it, I don't believe it.      Well, in a diffferent way. He's half expressionism, half...     
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                                                                     Andy Warhol


The desire to be a Pop Artist is what inspires Drella to consider the money to be made on painting, and $40,000 a painting is enough incentive for the young artist to pursue modern art. I often think of Ronald Sukenick whose short story Roast Beef from The Death of the Novel and Other Stories (1969) is assembled from tape recorded conversation at the dinner table, and the influence of Andy Warhol on the writers of the 60s is evident in the use of taped dialogue, innovative graphic design, and with the spirit of spontaneous art happenings. Drella and Ondine are on the streets of New York when they see artist Robert Rauschenberg who has played a positive role for the young artists. 


Rauschenberg.     He wa he wa he wa he was the one behind the pole, right?     Yah. He's very famous, he's very, he won in the centennial last year, very, he's with some gallery, he's with The Cattleman. if it wasn't for him I wouldn't be able to do the kind of work I do.
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                                                                       Andy Warhol


Robert Rauschenberg is an artist known for his post Dada collage approach to American painting, and the positive role played by the older generation encourages the young artists to strive for originality. Andy Warhol has achieved this with his use of informal American Expressionist language, so that a compares favorably with Ulysses (1922) by James Joyce, and has influenced other innovative writers to write informal intricate detailed monumental novels. Women (1983) by Philippe Sollers has followed this trend of dropping the formality of narration to express cool social perceptions. A by Andy Warhol is spoken/written as  a series of esthetic mediations which have grown out of the art scene in New York to become an international movement towards intellectual Pop Art fiction.

David Detrich lives in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan where he has just completed The Convergence of Two Narrative Lines Ascending, an ultramodern Surrealist novel written in minimal squares. This year he is working on Dream the Presence of the Circular Breast Starfish Topography, a monumental Surrealist novel written with innovative typographical design. His first novel Big Sur Marvels & Wondrous Delights (2001) is available from Amazon. He edits Innovative Fiction Magazine and Surrealist Star Clustered Illuminations.

Only Revolutions by Mark Z. Danielewski

Thursday, October 3, 2013 § 1

An Innovative Double Narrative: Typ(o)graphic
Poetic Monologues in Only Revolutions 

A Review by 
David Detrich

Only Revolutions (2006) by Mark Z. Danielewski is an innovative novel published by Pantheon Booksa division of Random House, New Yorkwritten with typographical design in two columns which represent poetic monologues by the characters Sam and Hailey. Each narrative can be read by turning the book over to find a different beginning: one for Sam and one for Hailey. The narrative includes historical notes in smaller type in the margins, while the innovative typographic design enhances the esthetic pleasure of the text making the poetic monologues easier to appreciate as a work of literary art: with the use of historical language from the settlers who used variations in spelling, the abstraction of individual words and letters, even using colored type for the letter o throughout the novel. Hiking through the mountains the narrator Hailey mentions plants and herbs from an informed perspective with occasional short phrases of dialogue in poetic portraits. Only Revolutions 
shows the influence of Susan Howe, Nouveau Roman novelist Michel Butor, and James Joyce. For those who seek a more poetic approach Mark Z. Danielewski has written a novel that is comparable to the literary classics of the 20th Century with a sophisticated typographic design that heightens the appreciation for the individual words and coined phrases.

In the first pages of the novel Hailey describes her hiking experience with descriptions of flowers and herbs from a naturalistic mountainscape, while her thoughts appear as an interior monologue with short phrases of intimate dialogue.

                    I will sacrifice nothing.
                    For there are no conflicts.
                    Except me. And there's only
                    one transgression. Me.
                           Of course Daisies & Saxifrage.
                                          chear:—Race on Ruler.
                             This my Charlock Mustard
                    seconds.
                          Bend by bend I lead every curve
                                                       blossomingly.
                                                       Only Revolutions
                                                       Mark Z. Danielewski

She is the leader of her social network, and her thoughts appear in the omniscience of the narrator who reveals insight into her interaction with other characters, who are introduced in capital letters. Hailey is known as a good hearted woman who represents the future, and her poetic portrait is highlighted with contrasting medium and bold typography.

                                            I'm The World which
                                 the mountain descends from
                                and I laugh because it tickles.
                    Tansy & Tarragon sway. 
                             and though by a flick I could stop it all,
                                                                         I'm curious.
                      Stave Oaks thrush:
                                          —Never get stung.
                                                         Only Revolutions
                                                         Mark Z. Danielewski

Only Revolutions is reminiscent of the writing techniques of James Joyce in Ulysses (1922), where poetic naturalism is blended with the inner thoughts of the characters. Here is a quotation from the chapter Bronze By Gold in Ulysses which has poetic writing that is similar in style and introspective in mood.

A husky fifenote blew.
Blew. Blue bloom is on the
Gold pinnacled hair.
A jumping rose on satiny breasts of satin, rose of Castille.
                                                              Ulysses
                                                              James Joyce

Characters are introduced with capital letters in a style that is similar to the Nighttown section of Ulysses (1922) by James Joyce, where the poetic prose becomes dramatic with the introduction of the five soda girls.

                                                         Even if Five Soda Girls 
                                                       blouses & bangs,
                                                    weepingly implore:
                                           Bounce for some jacks
                                                            Only Revolutions
                                                            Mark Z. Danielewski


Only Revolutions has developed the interior monologue style of Ulysses with the poetic use of words to create an introspective voice: the mind perceiving itself in the act of perceiving, which creates the dramatic self-conscious mind that we have come to admire in the works of the philosophers. Irish literature has been influenced by this self-reflexive trend, and Mark Z. Danielewski has specialized in the lyrical qualities of poetic prose from the perspective of American innovative fiction.

                               Giggles then dribble from my lips.
                                    Bubbles to breeze. Thousands.
                              Not one popping. Bubbles forever.
                                                    Just floating forever.
                                                          Popping forever.
                                                    Only Revolutions
                                                    Mark Z. Danielewski

This mini-portrait from the beginning of Only Revolutions reveals a changing attitude by a narrator who is gradually being won over by the readers, among whom will be found myself. This mutual appreciation is found in the design of Dream the Presence of the Circular Breast Starfish Topography, a novel-in-progress which exemplifies the typographical revolution of the early 21st Century: where the American innovative novel becomes a work of visuality, of art conscious page design, of added color to the text, and of a heightened sense of creativity fulfilling the dream of the new generation.

Oxygenation of theoretical blue ocean surface encircles the deep hued yellow metaphysical clock harmonics reading the angles of the Cubist book written in branches of celestial novelistic prose forming liquid syllables of poetic tweed which trace the sequential reader of vertical optical phenomenon comprising the ephemera of love 
                                       Dream the Presence of the Circular 
                                                   Breast Starfish Topography
                                                                      David Detrich 

There are two new books of critical essays, one is called Mark Z. Danielewski (2011) edited by Joel Bray and Alison Gibbons, and published by the Manchester University Press which features essays on The House of Leaves, The Fifty Year Sword, and Only Revolutions. Plus the new book Revolutionary Leaves: The Fiction of Mark Z. Danielewski (2012) edited by Sascha Pohlmann, and published by Cambridge Scholars Publishing looks interesting, both with well designed cover art.

Mark Danielewski's publisher recommends you read his new book, Only Revolutions… in incremental bursts. The idea is that, if you turn the book upside down and swing it around every eight pages, you can alternate the monologues of its two narrators, Sam and Hailey, so as to spin them together.
                                                                  New York Times
                                                                  Troy Patterson

The innovative novel Only Revolutions can be read in a number of ways, with the marginal notes suggesting the double narrative: the book has two front covers each with a narrative for Hailey or Sam.

Danielewski seems to be working in the same terrain where words in various font and print patterns as well as layouts vacillate between legibility and illegibility, perceptibility and imperceptibility. Of course, in the present instance, legibility and perceptibility relate to patterns of reading, ways of seeing or even ways of looking at the text, since Sam's and Hailey's textual streams which the book contains seem to be diminishing or increasing in size as the narrative develops, being simultaneously accompanied by long strips of historical data.                                         
                                                          'Print Novels and the 
                                                           Mark of the Digital':
                                                           Mark Z. Danielewski’s 
                                                           Only Revolutions (2006) 
                                                           and Media Convergence
                                                           Tatiani G. Rapatzikou


Only Revolutions is designed with ribbon place markers which make this a scriptural work written by a true believer which is symbolized by the two symbol on the spine of the book. I like the typographical design with the use of an individual color for the letter o. Only Revolutions by Mark Z. Danielewski is a modern innovative classic that uses both marginal notes and typographic design to convey a double narrative, each of which gradually reveals a minimal plot, yet more important is the esthetic appreciation the reader may have for the poetic nuances of the naturalistic text. The cool poetic dialogue makes this novel/artist's book an intellectually satisfying reading experience, and a direction in innovative fiction that integrates poetic writing with typographical design to produce an avant garde reading experience that is still intelligible and esthetically futuristic: the ratio of abstraction/intelligibility that makes Only Revolutions a foreshadowing of success.

David Detrich lives in the Upper Peninsula of Michigan where he has just completed The Convergence of Two Narrative Lines Ascending, an ultramodern Surrealist novel written in minimal squares. This year he is working on Dream the Presence of the Circular Breast Starfish Topography, a monumental Surrealist novel written with innovative typographical design. His first novel Big Sur Marvels & Wondrous Delights (2001) is available from Amazon. He is the editor of Innovative Fiction Magazine and Surrealist Star Clustered Illuminations.